Don’tbeagainstthetrafficrules!IgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.Igotoschoolbybikeat7:30inthemorning.Imustcrosstwobusyroads.Ifthetrafficlightisredoryellow,IknowIcan’tcrosstheroad,soIwait.Ifthelightturnsgreen,Iknowitmeans“Go”,andthenIwalkacrosstheroad.Ialwaysrideontherightsideoftheroad.Iamneveragainstthetrafficrules.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。小朋友们在写作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。MybirthdayYesterdaywasSeptember20th.Itwasmybirthday.Ihadabirthdayparty.Iatetoomuch.Mikebroughtsomefruit.Jennybroughtsomecandy.Marybroughtalotofcookies.Mymommadeabirthdaycakeforme.Mydadboughtatoycarforme.Iwasveryhappy.Atthepartywesanganddanced.Wehadagoodtime.