小学生英语作文及评语【篇一】小学生英语作文及评语MissTangismyEnglishteacher.She’sverypretty.Sheistallandthin.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.Herhairislong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andshelikessinginganddancing,too.HerEnglishisverygood.WeoftenplaygamesinEnglishclasses.Sheisverykindtous.Weallloveher.评语：这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。【篇二】小学生英语作文及评语Hello,mynameisLinMin.IliveinChangAntown.IstudyinNo.1primaryschool.Ilikemyschool.IgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.AndIlikemyweekendtoo.OnSaturdays,Idohomeworkinthemorning.ThenIeatlunch.Iplaycomputergamesintheafternoon.Icanplaycomputergamesonlyonehour.Iplaythepianoatthreeo’clock.Ilikeplayingthepiano.Icanlistentomusicintheevening.Ithinkitissofunny.OnSundays,IoftenlearnEnglish.Intheevening.Imustgotobedearly,becausetomorrowIwillgotoschool.评语：本文小作者思路清晰，她的视角，情感，用语都能充分反映小学生的写作特点，使人倍感亲切。全文都透露出小作者的积极向上，做事井井有条的精神风貌。让人仿佛身临其境，感受她那忙碌而又充实的周末生活。【篇三】小学生英语作文及评语Zoomhadabusyweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,hewashedhisclothesandwenttoapark.HedidhishomeworkandwentfishingonSaturdayafternoon.OnSundaymorning,hecleanedhisroomandvisitedhisgrandparents.HeplayedfootballandwatchTVonSundayafternoon.Zoomwastootired.评语：写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。【篇四】小学生英语作文及评语Hello,everyone!IamTina.Iamalovelygirl.Iam11yearsold.Myfavouriteseasonsaresummerandwinter.Insummer,it’salwayssunnyandhot.Icanwearmyniceskirtsanddresses.Icanswiminthesea,too.Theskyisveryblue.Thecloudsarewhite.Thecityisverybeautiful.Wintercomes.It’swhiteeverywhereinmyhometown.Inwinter,it’swindy,snowyandcold.ButIhaveaverygoodtimeinwinter.Icanski.Icanskate.Icanmakeasnowmanandplaygamesinthesnow,too.Oh,Iamveryhappy!HowIlovesummerandwinter!评语：文章很清晰的写出不同季节的不同天气，以及应该穿的衣服，可以做的事情。而且语法正确，用词丰富。【篇五】小学生英语作文及评语Hello，mynameisZhangSongpei.I’melevenyearsold.IstudyinChang’anNo.1PrimarySchoolinDongguanCity.Myschoolisverybeautiful.Let’shavealook！Afterentertheschoolgate，thereisasmallsquare.G