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专家点评SAT作文|小学生优秀作文杂志下面是专家对于一篇SAT作文的修改，这篇SAT作文的作者基础一般，专家把文章拆成了五部分，分别做了点评，包括分析部分和修改部分。Somefailedexperiencesareusefulforus.第一部分：Takemyselfforasanexample.Iplayedtennisattheageofeight.WhenIwaselevenyearsold,ItookpartinaSportsMeetingabouttenniswhichwasorganizedbyJiangsuProvince,aprovinceinthesoutheastofChina.1AtthebeginningofthegroupmatchIhadwontwoopponents,butmythirdopponent,Hu,whowasintheJiangsu2provinciancesteam,defeatedme.Thescorewas1:6and2:6.Attheendofourmatch,heheldouthisthumbtothegroundandsaid,Loser!Youcannotwinforever!Icouldnotforgetitafterthematch,thoughIwouldhaveanotherdoublesmatchthenextday.分析：thefirstgroupstageteam省队第二部分：1Hiswordsreverberatedunceasinglynearbymyear,eveninminenextday,Icouldnotfocusonthematch.Atthebeginningofthematch,thescorewas1:4.2Whatareyoudoing?Mypartnershoutedatmewhilehishandknockedatmyheadandhisarmwindedaroundmyshoulder.Youshouldntpayattentiontoyourfailurethatwassomethinginthepast.Andyoumustfocusonthismatchnow!Heshouted.Atlast,wewonthematchandgottheprizeof6ththatyear.
